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Tom and Nightmare have an engaging conversation about the finer points of life.
I never really got mudkipz in the first place....
This still made me lol tho, good job, especially on the voice acting
Why, thank you.
Watch your audio!
There is one audio problem you have, you can only solve with money. Or more your voice actors. because their microphones aren't that good. Another I always can give to voice actors is to use a pop killer to eliminate the noise caused through breathing or letters like f s v or others. These things are easily built with metal or plastic rings ans a nylon stocking. You also can use a wood frame if you want.
Next thing. Watch the mix. Don't make music or sound to loud. It will cause distortions. For example the music you used in the end. It was completely distorted. That's just horrible. I know, that many people think "louder" = "more powerful impact on audience", but that's simply untrue. Many people are listening to this with headphones. Please have mercy with their ears.
If you want to know, if something is comfortable to listen to in its loudness, just try it out yourself, before you post it. Put on your headphones and listen to it at your usual volume. Be leave me, people will be gratefully towards you.
I mean, it's nice if your toons feature audio and voice acting, but listen to something that is terribly distorted and has such a high range volume dynamic, it's just a pain. So watch out for your peak meter. Don't let it go red.
So overall, nice animation, but you can improve on the your audio.
Keep up the good work.
I know, my mike sucks. :(.
Thanks for the audio tips, they're not my strong point.
funny. a bit random. wats the song at the end
"Requiem for a Dream" from Lord of the Rings.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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