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Totally Morbid. hehe.
it could be better
it could be really better put a plot to it this is just like writing a book with pictures and sound try writting a book then add sound and picturs on flash that discribes the words in the book and u just might make a good flash
Let's all straighten something out right now with a visit from Divergence the English-Language Nazi (pronounced, as our forebears did it, 'nah-zee') Death and Morbidity are not interchangable concepts. Someone dying is not necessarily morbid, nor is morbidity necessarily exclusively referrent of death. Death is quite natural, whereas some legitimately morbid things are quite unnatural (auto-erotic asphyxiation comes to mind.) Morbidity refers to the nature of existence as a spiral towards inevitable entropy. Whereas death refers to the end of life, a form of entropy, but no more significant than the wilting of a flower, or the proverbial ant under a magnifying glass. Yet I digress; grammar lesson aside, the reason I object to this film is not because of the title clashing with the general "plot" of the work, it's because of the following factors:
1. Too short, good flash is longer. Like a real, honest-to-god joke, it has a setup, then a punch line, not simply the latter.
2. Stickmen aren't fun anymore, they're your grandpa's flash, sonny.
3. No sound. Sound improves ANYTHING. (Except a cat orgy.)
and 4. You can do better, I know you can, because anyone can. So do it. We believe in you!
So I'm voting a 1 on this, no offense, and I hope you can see why. Try better next time, and good luck to you.
Unorigional, not morbid either.
"I don't know about anyone else, but i'm getting pretty tired of the whole stickman thing. "
I agree, this stickman thing is overused and besides that it's unorigional. If your going to submit something, make it gripping and more or less make it origional and not just what every one else is doing.
i'm being nice with a 3
I don't know about anyone else, but i'm getting pretty tired of the whole stickman thing.
Ha, NOT totally morbid.
s God t this i was c NOT k "totally" d morbid e as a the t title h says . if c you're o peicing m the letters together, it's a site that has REAL stick people dying, a long time running website, and a great one at that. This just sucked.
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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