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ShatteredHeaven Prologue


Date Submitted

05/28/2008 | 09:21PM EST

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Author Comments

Edit:

I'm going to say this one more time I guess, before you post please take the time to read what I wrote. Because half of the comments about negatives I already stated here. I'm not saying post only positives, no that would be pointless and arrogant. But if you're going to post please make it constructive, I started this a long time ago and I've improved a lot. And as the episode goes on it becomes pretty clear. But I wanted to keep the animation rough because it shows where I started.

The audio has issues, yeah that's a given, I also stated I was sorry about it and to bear with it for now. I post on NG because stuff is easier to get shown here. And I feel people who have been animating for years can offer me constructive criticism on how to get better. I do not respond or acknowledge reviews of "get better" "this is shit", please don't waste your time writing them because I'm not going to waste my time taking them seriously.

If you want to diss my project then whatever, but please take the time to actually read what I take the time to write to give a background on what you're about to watch.

Well I had typed out a massive commentary then my browser closed and I apologize but my patience is dead. It was a long work day for me.

Anyway, moving on.

I apologize for the audio quality, I was new to the program when I first started Flash in December. For the NG version I had to lower the quality of the audio as well as the images. I just ask you all to bear with it, I know it's rough. I have a better version that is the entire episode including the opening and ending on my production site.

www.azure-productions.com /sh_episode_1.html

Along the way I've gotten a lot of tips from friends of the trade and I learned a lot more about optimization so the file won't be so big. So for the first episode it had to be broken down into parts, once again I apologize. The 2nd episode is under way and the audio quality is already much better and leveled and the art and animation is much cleaner and smoother (pencil tool ftw).

With that disclaimer out of the way I hope you enjoy this minus the short comings.

Short Synopsis: Based loosely on the novel series of the same name. Futuristic war feel, the events in the anime happen after the 3rd book "Shattered Heaven Episode III: Serenade for the Winds." Both Earth and Mars are rebuilding under a new leadership known as the United Generation of World and is headed by a single man named Gail Contadino. 2 years after the end of the war mysterious deaths continue to occur, namely of some of the most skilled Mechanical Frame pilots from both sides. Focus at first is on the main characters of my novel and how they are dealing with the aftermath of the war and eventually them becoming targeted by this unknown source.

This is the prologue to the first season and actually does not happen until later on.

Much thanks to my cast

Adam Novus: Adam "Azure Knight" Tilford
Sharon Amare: Morgan "Mochan" Barnhart
Stephen Novus: Stephen Alonso
Ashley Bellelus: Melissa D. Johnson "Mippa"
Mario Liberalis: Corey Holland "Mysticshinhanku"
Heather Pertencia: Candi Santora "icandi"
Luscious Malum: Ty "Aramek" Konzak
Gail Contandino: Ryan Gilbert
Amy: Lira Tao

Music from:

Gundam Seed OSTs

I am uploading the rest of the episode tonight, more than likely right now.

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Average Score: 7.5 / 10

Score: 7
Kaolin

"Good start"

by: Kaolin
date: May 30, 2008

Despite the above stated flaws in your commentary, I truly believe that this flash has potential. Its a great start and I can't wait to see the rest ><
Though one thing that annoyed me about this flash was the hair thing as some other people have mentioned before. It does show off what you can do, but its a tad over done.
But anyway hoping to see some promising stuff in your future works ^^

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Score: 9
vintje00

"good :P but also annoying"

date: May 30, 2008

i really liked it, but what did you do with the clouds, they look much diffrent than al the other things in you flash but i liked it :D i acree with iHeartCookies that the hair was a bit distracting and for me sometimes a little bit annoying, going to watch the other parts right now so i will put a review on that to help you make better flash :D but i think its pretty good
i cant make flash my self :P
9/10 4/5

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Score: 9
hellz0ne

"wtf the bad review people are nubs -_-"

date: May 29, 2008

u sir may i say even tho people are reviewin that this is bad. i say this was a spectacular job! and i will defenetly be lookin for part 2 of episode one let alone when u finished episode 2 :D well dont my friend just well f#$%in done :D

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Score: 7
iHeartCookies

"Good job. _-l-_ to the bad reviews"

date: May 29, 2008

Nice work. It may not have the smoothest frame rate but it is a good start. Distinct artwork (woot i love it) and the audio could be better As people progress they will get better. I don't know what is with the negative reviews i see on some of your work. I think what your doing is great. Besides if ppl have time to blam you, they should probably go look at the other 10000 or so shit flashes that are posted each day (most are just stick figures, porn or a penis drawn in ms paint). Its like a no-effort warzone out there in the flash portal.

This is not like i am a good guy or anything. Usually I am a pain the ass (and i am when it comes to reviews) but i hate seening good flashes getting the wrong rating. *cough* i really think 2 is way too low consider the artwork and audio (lol even the penis drawing gets a 2).

Anyways what i found funny was the swooshy hair. I mean sure it was a bit distracting but you can't help crack a smile =P.

May 29, 2008

Author's Response:

Thank you, I really appreciate it that.

People have their own opinions so whatever. But I really appreciate it when people say things like you did.

The 2nd episode is going to be much better that much I can guarantee as it isn't an experiment to see if I can make it work.

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Score: 10
Rachis

"Innuendo!!!"

by: Rachis
date: May 29, 2008

I'm giving this a full 10 star rating because I've seen the full cleaned up version of this animation. I enjoy the fact that there is actually a story involved and I can't wait to see what this guy has in store for the telling of the rest of it.

Honestly, this guy is the shit. When he gets around to putting up his completed works then you'll see what he's capable of doing. It's really not fair to grade him bad on this either considering he gave a complete explanation for everything in his comments. The first two commentors need to learn how to read. I know its hard sometimes, but shit happens.

Innuendo ftw!!

May 29, 2008

Author's Response:

I appreciate it. I wouldn't go that far to say I'm the shit, but yeah this is an example of how I started.

Act 1 Part 1, the other submission I put up tonight is much better than this but was when I started experimenting with walking in. At the time I felt it was really good, but by the time I did the end scene I had walking looking much smoother. This episode is an example of progress.

I appreciate what you said. Thanks.

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