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May 28, 2008 | 5:01 PM EDT
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After i got a tablet i went back and pretty much went over everything that was originally hand drawn in the original chapter 1, i also added a fight scene for practice, and i think the chapter really needed it anyways.

If you're new to this series, Exile is a fantasy adventure based in a world called Ossic Valley. It follows the story of Luke Helm, a boy who's parents were murdered by an unknown killer. Because of it he could join the Royal Guards, protectors of the city, and he strives to get his revenge.

Exile: Chapter 2 is also in the portal if you're interested, and 3 will be up in only a few months time. (It could be sooner, however i'm going on a 6 week trip to switzerland and am incapable of working on it whilst there XD )

Please Check out the forums at www.z9.invisionfree.com/e xileforums
Ciao
Jordan "Duchednier" Duchnycz

Reviews


Problema757Problema757

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Cool

They are TOTALLY fighting in an office building
totally sweet


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pianoman2011pianoman2011

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Ok...

It seems like you went back and touched up the animation while leaving the voice acting the way it was. That was disappointing. There are some lines given that desperately need revision. It does look better than the original, and the fight scene does help a bit, but if the series continues to sound like the first episode, it's going to be a challenge to sit through. That said, I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story.



ZertiofZertiof

Rated 3 / 5 stars

ummm

this kinda...

sucks ass



elliot12343elliot12343

Rated 5 / 5 stars

great

wat is the name of the song during the credits


JordanD responds:

Departure, by Cry of Silence


boregamerboregamer

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

i see whats going on here....

i think i know whats going on... that "monk" royal guard dude told that guard who trains Luke and some other guard to kill Lukes parents so then hes forced to be a guard... imma watch the next =D