This is Shark Lock. Happy lockday '08! I present you here with my first episode of my new lock series, "Tales from Camp Lock Lake". These are pretty much true stories, obviously some aspects rather untrue :3
I've been planning this series since October, and did the character intro then (the characters were a little different due to the active userbase then). I then decided last month to pick that up and do it for lockday. I was originally planning to get 3-4 scenes in, but I had some problems. My fla got corrupted. TWICE. Then the sound card on my desktop got fried so i had to do most of it on this slow laptop. But here it is with two completed scenes. Close enough.
There will hopefully be more episodes in the future. You will notice that not all of the characters in the intro are actually used in this flash, well that's becasue they are the main characters of the series, not this flash in particular.
Anyway, happy watching, vote 5, and if you haven't already, go join the lock legion!
Nice
This was a good start to this little Lock series of yours,the script was great as was the story i also loved the animation and i was happy to see it have a great amount of characters too,overall this was a solid start and i will go check out episode 2 now. =)
Nice looking
I quite like the way you've put this together - quick set 'em up, knock 'em down plays with the gags, though you could put a few more gags in each episode. Perhaps have something like a camping trip and someone forgets to bring the food, or something essential like that.
I think that you've got a good format, with very nice drawing and animation style and I can certainly see that you've settled into the Lock Legion nicely. I look forward to seeing more of these in the near future.
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Well done.
Now if this isn't a good submission, then I don't know what is. The graphics were solid and wonderful to look at, first of all. And the story done in those scenes were also very funny in some points. The subtitles being different colors depending on who's speaking was also a worthy attachment. All in all, a good, enjoyable submission.
Thanks!
Awesome!
I can't wait for the next episode!
Thanks! Might be a while though. I have some projects that I have found more important.
I thought i would share a stupid moment..
I signed up with the LL and don't even have Flash.....
(anyway)
Animation: 9.9 (I give no tens in the sub categories)
Sound: 8.9 (I just don't like the distorted speech of LL, CC, and GG movies)
Overall: look to the upper right
cool kids end things with .9's
It makes it look more professional or something.
