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May 25, 2008 | 12:51 PM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place May 26, 2008

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EDIT(6/1/08): Awesome, 13th best of the week! I'm really glad you all like this so much!

EDIT(5/25/08): Awesome, Daily 3rd! Thanks for the votes/reviews everyone!

This is just another quick little short, it's about 30 seconds long. I had fun making this one, and my voice actors were quick to reply to my PM, so that's good.

The Voice Actors for this were:
Jim- rabidsquirl
Gary- dante224

Credit for the idea goes to my friend Sam.

I hope you enjoy it!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 26, 2008



Jimtopia responds:

Can't forget that.


Rated 3 / 5 stars May 26, 2008


Animation: Poor. There wasn't really any animation at all. No Lip syncs. All tweened. Could have animated the explosion.

Art: Average. The characters could have more detail to them. Kind of boring. Like the background though.

Audio: Excellent. Great Voice Acting. Fit the mood and characters very well.

Plot: Good. A nice short little story with a twist. Wasn't too predictable. Could have been a little better.

Menu and Transitions: Good. I liked the colleague of characters for the menu. The transitions and camera angles were smooth and Enjoyable.


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Jimtopia responds:

I fail to see what's wrong with tweens. They're easier, and things like this don't need to be frame by frame. That just makes it excessive. One thing I want to point out is that I'm using KoolMoves, and animating mouths with KoolMoves is almost impossible; there's no way to preview a little chunk of the cartoon very easily so I would have to re-watch sections of it over and over and over to get mouths to look right and honestly, it's not worth the trouble when the characters are meant to be simple. Anyway, It's not that I can't animate FBF, I just saw no need to in this cartoon; so I have to disagree with you on that section of your review.

The art of my characters is that they're simplistic, that's how they are. I think they have a certain charm about them that, in making them look more detailed/realistic, they would lose.

I agree with you on the audio; I think I have a cool team of VA's.

I enjoyed the plot of this one, if that's what you prefer to call it. I mainly just call it a gag.

I have been practicing on the camera angles, so I'm glad you noticed that.