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May 25, 2008 | 6:31 AM EDT

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Author Comments

Hi everyone,

this is my first submission. I just started with flash. As I realized animating this one that my skills are pretty bad, I focused on the story. But that seemed not as easy as I thought, too.

Maybe one could give me a little hint what I should make better in future?!

Thanks for watching,



Rated 3 / 5 stars

hmm...not bad!

I thought it was pretty good for a first submission. Add some sound and music, and maybe make the text a little brighter, and it'll be really good! :)

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

Good Start

On next put sound and music, is best, if hav sound i put 8, but on grafics only 6.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

That's pretty good!

I like how it's creative. The only thing might've wanted to do would be to use a bigger size background. But, I really shoudn't be saying anything, cause I'm even worse.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Own style

it has it's own unique style and i like it!
Next time maybe make it a bit longer and stop the animation from shaking,that was pretty annoying


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

actualy i found the animation awesome

the animation was very good, i think you have some talent with it! its a pass by me!