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Short story about young man who falls into trap of his own memories.
Well, I worked a bit on it for some time.. Song is made by my friend's band, big thanks for it!
May lag on older computers! If your pc isn't relatively new, then hit Q to change quality (low or medium recommended)
Edit: Daily Feature, woah! Thanks people! :D
Improve your drawing skills (technical stuff)
The effects were nice, but the guys face changed too much from each angle. When the girl moves her arm the upperarm stayed still...
The music is what probably made this tolerable.
well, I admit, proportions of human body and backgrounds are my weak side. I'm still learning, and if you'll look through my flash as by "history of learning" you'll see how first scenes are crappiest, while in last ones I was improving, crafting my style.
Thanks for reasonable review!
just 4/10 cause this is so boring,make something with a better story,or even let the people speak!
and the arms are to long at the last scene
some of it was a bit confusing but i liked it
Could use a few more hints.
First off, the graphics are pretty damn good and there's definitely a strong resemblence to Death Note. The music is a fine pick. It's original and fits in really well. The concept behind the story is interesting however it's not all too clear as to why the guy turns evil, or is it just his dark side making a sudden in-and-out appearance in his fantasy? Maybe it's the fact that he hates the girl as much as he loves her? Or maybe he's just paranoid and he sees the girl as something that is corrupting him...
Hmmmm...well, the idea behind it all is still in the air. So I would suggest giving a few more hints to what really happens. Also, I'm not sure whether or not it was intended so the movie would keep the rythm of the music but I think that some shots are a bit too long like the one that the guy walks besides other people in the beginning and then the view changes to get a shot of the sun for a transition.
In the end, it's a great little movie that I will recommend to other buddies of mine.
d'oh, people found out Death Note influences. curse you L!
Thanks for the review, yeah I realize some parts are kinda slow, but well, nobody's perfect.
The only thing that bothers me is why would he kill his girlfriend? Is there a reason? She looked rather nice : /
Besides that I really liked the part where he eyes were glowing an all the memories appeared, reminded me of Death Note :3
Keep up the good work :)
heh, I admit, I was impressed by Death Note, so some influences may be found in the flash.
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