Better animation comes with time and practice. For your first flash it is not too bad. I kinda feel like you were excited to upload this when you could have made it longer. The horse actually didn't look too bad. Though there were parts where the under lying frame of the horses body and the layer with his legs don't sync fully. There are gaps and u can see parts of the background. Sound effects would not hurt this either. BUT it was not bad, i liked the song i am curious of where this is going. Good first film buddy!

Boring!

Too long of an intro, and after the intro was not interesting at all. I suggest trying to grab the watcher's attention before boring them, It's what earns people 0's ;)

i'm surprised

i agree with hysellmoot,
you have great ideas but
you need lots of work on
drawing,

the concept is great,
only thing i didn't like was
it was a little short,
and the animation could
have been much better

Keep working

The animation needs a lot of work but i really liked how the story begins and the music title of the song please?

Hmmm...

First of all, it was way too short, you could have includedso much more into this, and I can't see why you didn't...

Second, graphics were horrible.. I ask that you remake this movie, when you have learned better how to draw and the different techniques of flash, because I think the concept may be good, the music was wonderful, thank your mom from me and send me a PM with the name of the song. Maybe I missed it in the credits, but I don't care to see it all again just for that.

All in all, I voted 1, because I think it was better than Crap, but not good enough as to what it has potential to be... Please, there are too few good knight-flashes.. Make this into a good one!