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Tarantos is the hero who sets darkness down, but also sacrifices himself in the process, this is the first part of many in his life. This is my first flash submission, please enjoy!
*I know the horse is messed up, but that was the hardest thing of the film...
Too long of an intro, and after the intro was not interesting at all. I suggest trying to grab the watcher's attention before boring them, It's what earns people 0's ;)
well, this WAS my first flash, good points though. I'm much better now :D
i agree with hysellmoot,
you have great ideas but
you need lots of work on
the concept is great,
only thing i didn't like was
it was a little short,
and the animation could
have been much better
The animation is great, I loved how the shadow cast upon the door as the knight knocked on it, well done. The tears could have been a bit slower and the horse was a little chopped up. The trotting animation was enjoyable however and I think you did a great, great job!
I actually really want to see the next part, the story captured my attention.
Please PM when the next one is out!
The animation needs a lot of work but i really liked how the story begins and the music title of the song please?
First of all, it was way too short, you could have includedso much more into this, and I can't see why you didn't...
Second, graphics were horrible.. I ask that you remake this movie, when you have learned better how to draw and the different techniques of flash, because I think the concept may be good, the music was wonderful, thank your mom from me and send me a PM with the name of the song. Maybe I missed it in the credits, but I don't care to see it all again just for that.
All in all, I voted 1, because I think it was better than Crap, but not good enough as to what it has potential to be... Please, there are too few good knight-flashes.. Make this into a good one!
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