Score: 0
"Weak"
date: May 24, 2008
Just one question, why do you do this? This will not help anyone for one reason, it's already covered in the flash tutorial section on newground and this will never be there. So nobody ( or almost ) will ever use this.
Here's some guideline if you ever want to make other tutorial:
Use better looking graphic (it give's the impression that some effort has been made)
Custom cursor movie clip goes on the highest layer
The loading animation should stop when the content is fully loaded
A tutorial should always have an index in order for the viewer to skip to parts he actually want to see
Before making a tut for newgrounds you should first look what hasn't been already covered
A higher rezolution for your tut would also be much appreciated
Movie clip are generally more versatile than buttons + you can keep all your code on one layer.
gotoAndStop/gotoAndPlay are better use with frame labels. This way if you add frames and the frame number of your previous destination change, you will be covered.
Always explain all parts of the code and why it work and what are common mistake someone could encounter.
Add some animation to illustrate a step by step approach to guide the viewer and what not, throw in a mascot to make your tutorial more friendly.
I could go on but I think you can see my point. en plus, avec un peu de temps et de revision tu pourras trouver d'autres choses a améliorer.
May 24, 2008
Author's Response:
Ya I know there are a ton of tutorials out there better than mine, but the difference is I will actually help you if you have a question or have a problem.