Score: 6
"Needs something else..."
date: August 17, 2008
I think that this is a decent enough animation, but I feel that you could certainly use something else to add an extra dimension to this whole piece.
Perhaps you could make 2 or 3 different coloured lines that dance around making the pictures? I think that the way the start went, you certainly need to consider getting a little ambient piece for your introduction - it's just too bland without anything.
The animation is good, but for me, it's too random, as I prefer things that move from point A to point B and you can clearly see how (or why) they get there. With this, it's very ambiguous and the abstract nature of the Frame-by-Frame animation doesn't help much, I'm afraid.
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