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Tyler Gibb, Marc Schultz (Buy!)


Submitted: 05/22/2008 | 06:14PM EST

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Current Score: 4.04 / 5.00

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The battle may be over but there's still one more enemy to face and one more secret to be revealed.

http://www.minushi.com

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Average Score: 8.1 / 10

Score: 3
indiego

"Deus ex machina?"

date: June 19, 2009

I did not expect this to be your glorious climax because the rising action seemed to suggest that this would be one of many scenes that would build on character development and mood setting but you just had to end it in such an undesirable fashion.

I am most disappointed in the fact that you lacked any sort of falling action after you hit such a horrendous conclusion.

The epilogue was a bit shorthanded as well.

Overall I would say that I liked your series up until I saw episode 18 and episode 19 and that I would hope in the future that you would work on your endings.

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Score: 10
funmaster

"that was a good one"

date: June 23, 2008

wheres Arnald when u need him lol

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Score: 7
X-Gary-Gigax-X

"lol found glitches"

date: June 16, 2008

1.If I were cal's mother, I wouldn't put blades on my first robot. That's just irreal and stupid.
2.Again, if I were her, I wouldn't make the turn off switch a riddle.
3.Voice recognition works with voice tone parameters. That way, Cal wouldn't be able to desactivate the robot, because he doesn't has his mother's voice.

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Score: 10
FaLk

"feywoods a loser"

by: FaLk
date: June 16, 2008

feywood u cunt dude u havnt even submitted anything and yor acting like you could do better and wots with the crazy long reviews for every episode?? u must hav too much time on yor hands do u still live with yor mum?? and the fact that yor a newzealander makes u even worse go hump a dead sheep u loser

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Score: 10
badazz5001

"lights out"

date: June 15, 2008

coooooooooooooish awsome

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