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UPDATE: Fixed the loop Problem.
UPDATE: Improved In General.
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I've Decided to Submit my Practice Animation in Order to Receive Feed-Back and Advice.
In Vol.1 i Worked on
-Filters such as Blur
If you dislike animations that are sole created for this purpose then i am sorry.
You should put like some type of blur on the background and do etter work on te ground.
Well this flash is just showing Mario run. Not very good, but is quite boring. I will show you how.
Graphics: 4/10, The background was ok but was just repeated over and over again. Mario was blured while he was running.
Animation: 5/10, The movement was OK but really boring.
Sound: 8/10, The sound was clear but so annoying.
Plot: 1/10, Mario must be running from or to something. So that was also quite boring.
Overall you got 18/40. So the average of that is 4.5 and I that is why I have given you a 4.
Work on it but pretty good for a first flash.
It was ok...
It looked ok, I guess. Keep the background blur, get rid of the blur on Mario and fix the ground: you can see where it begins and ends with an obvious black line.
Why don't you post this kind of thing on DeviantArt or something?
Awesome graphics for a practice flash.
Yeaah, I don't see WHY you should make a thing like this to be evaluated on your skills. It's too short to give anything much away from what you can do.
The music's good at First, but at the re-run which you put there it doesn't stop and when you restart the movie the voice layers and layers until you get to the black screen. I see that looping is a thing you need to fix judging from your other flash too.
Nothing, just Mario running across the screen.
First button works, but then there's nothing to get you out of the second animation.
Funny until I realized I have to Work for you to help u imrpove your animation.
Not bad for first flash
A short film about a park bench
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