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This is just the trailer. The full movie will be released in a few weeks, so just keep waiting.
Anyway, this took several weeks to do, but im pretty happy about the result. :)
I'll try answer every comment.
I think that there are a few areas where you could improve, but overall, you've produced a good flash with a decently worked out plot and reasonable animation.
I think that when you draw the characters and you do the outlines of the characters, I wouldn't put it around the shoulders, as the outline looks as if it should go over the shoulder towards the neck, rather than around a U-turn towards the wrist again.
The guy that ran for cover ran far too slowly - you may as well have animated a dive, it would have been more simple and effective.
I'm still looking forward to the conclusion though :)
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A few improvements on the animation and it can be a masterpiece.
Do you have any ideas that will make my flash better? :)
Although the humour seemed a bit dry i enjoyed it, it kind of grew on me :D. a bit more animation and itd be great. i personally rip on css because of peoples gameplay methods and that was just great for that.
Liked the introduction for everyone and the continued bit, i will look out for the next 1, cheers
i play C.S. and i didnt find that funny but at least u make a pretty long flash unlike other ppl
Actually fairly entertaining
One thing though, the sound was off by about a half second. Not a BIG deal... just a bit annoying.
I know, but it's a god damm trailer. that's my excuse...
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