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A piece of course work for my degree. We had to create something interactive that promoted the values of slow food.
Its aimed at kids and is meant to incourage them to cook healthy food with there parents.
Interesting and Professional
This is a really cool product. I liked that the instructions were verbal since that would be particularly good for children whose reading skills might not be very confident. However, I think one way you could improve this flash would be to add either subtitles or a written summary of the recipe at the end of each section. That way anyone who wanted to see the recipe written down wouldn't have to make their own notes.
Subtitles were part of my original idea, I just ran out of time.
Thanks for the review!
This is proof that a flash does not have to be voilent or lowbrow comedy to be really good
this was a good flash
thanks for the flash it was very nice of you to have thought of making recipes for us
What to make for dinner?
This was a very nice flash animation and I rather enjoyed it. The drawings were cute and, I believe, are perfect for targeting the younger youth audience. The voice-over could've been done a bit better because the microphone was picking up your breath after you spoke hard letters (i.e. Hard Letters: B, P, H. Soft Letters: G, U, A). Other than that, I give it two thumbs up, an 8/10 and a very hungry guy who's going to make some cookies and a fruit smoothie.
Let me know how the cooking goes!
Ok... For a piece of coursework sure it was okay. You have apparently hit your targets for this one. I however, fail to see the need for submitting it to Newgrounds where you'll just get rants from people like me thanking you for wasting their time speaking at us telling us how to make a friggin smoothie. If part of your coursework is publishing it then fine, but still, even if it is how many children who don't know how 2 make a pizza come on here any way, and even any who do probably wont be observant enough to notice this which, no offense, is unlikely to make it to the front page.
Well my reasining in submitting it is so that it is now online. Woo!
And there hasnt been many people ranting, witchto be honest I expected lots and lots.
Also its my higest scoreing peice.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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