Score: 8
"I'll be the first to review it."
date: May 20, 2008
Despite your nasty comment on my latest news post, I still decided to review this. I know you were just trying to help, but you came across as mean when you said it. I figured this was the best way to get your attention.
Annnnyway! Onto the review.
Good Lip-syncing in this one, even though the guy on the right (not sure what his name is) didn't need a mouth, the guy on the left's mouth was timed fairly well. The graphics in this were okay, but a little awkward looking at points; some of the lines on people were thicker than others, and it looked kind of weird. I did love the Fire and the Sky though, awesome work on those.
The humor in this was pretty good, kind of gross at one point, but that was intentional, so it's cool. I liked the joke at the end, "Okay that's enough of that." *gunshots*. Nice.
Other than the slightly awkward graphics, this was a pretty good flash.
8/10
4/5
~Jimtopia
May 20, 2008
Author's Response:
Sorry if I sounded mean. I just tend to be very striaght forward sometimes.
Thanks for the review. I notice the awkwardness of it all too. The shading and even more FBF helped a lot. I'm practicing with the wacom everyday now. The new shorts/toons should be even better.
Also, the one without a mouth is MTC aka MTCaptain. :3
