Score: 5

"why make a smiple animation"

by: Frekko

date: May 18, 2008

you could have made it more meaning full!

Score: 1

"Flash work"

by: Digital-guy

date: May 18, 2008

Try again until when you gonna be better

Score: 1

"Not terrible."

by: BobThePen

date: May 18, 2008

It's okay. You had a simple plot, basic animation, and avoided being just spastic and stupid (which is a problem with alot of first submissions do). To make it better, add a loading screen, sound effects, backgrounds, some more animation, etc. Overall, just try to make it more complete. I don't think its portal qualitiy yet, but you don't have far to go.

(Also, it seemed like he magically had a bandana appear around his waist.)

Score: 2

"no point"

by: zooyorkskater93

date: May 18, 2008

the only good part was the art. the art was ok NOT THE BEST but ok

Score: 9

"Good for a first"

by: Noray

date: May 18, 2008

For a first it was still a little to short, and it had no background. The preloader was obviously just thrown together quickly, and I like how you actually had a replay/come to my site screen at the end.
The animation was good, not great, but good. Try some shading techniques.
With no background you should have added a drop down shadow (theres an effect in flash for it).
Don't use popular songs IMO and have voice acting.
That about sums it up. I can tell that you will be a good anime artist.