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OatlandTrial EP#2 Sleepy

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May 17, 2008 | 12:09 PM EDT

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This is the 2nd episode, wich I hope is better than the first, its longer, and theres more plot.
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This is about a boy named mason, who has alot of problems, like most people, nothing makes him too special, and he has a crush on a girl named Sam. the go to the same school in oatland.
this episode is introducing mason, and his issue, such as, blanking, and shortness of memory.
Episode 1 can be found here : http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/439942

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XxTeutronxXXxTeutronxX

Rated 3 / 5 stars

ok....

could ya pls gimme a preloader so i kinda kno whats happenin'? twas kinda good but id like u to improve cause u can do better than that



kernalphagekernalphage

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

preloader plz!!

the site does have them available for download.

and animate it?
it's kinda boring...


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hunter2009 responds:

yeah, i forgot to put on in, ill go do that and update it. thanks.


skwrlzrevilskwrlzrevil

Rated 1 / 5 stars

meh...

It is sort of good, but not extremely bad either. Delete the 'next' button and actually have it function as a movie next time. Also... try to do more with the art in it.


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hunter2009 responds:

Ok, that shouldnt be to hard.


alcoholic123carneyalcoholic123carney

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

this could really use some more work

add voices and more music (diff background diff mood need diff music) make the text bigger fix the next button (it doesn't work well) and you have a pretty good film


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hunter2009 responds:

OOOH yeah your right, like, put sad music on sad scenes.