Newgrounds.com — Everything, By Everyone.

Checking login status…

USERNAME:

PASSWORD:

Logging in…

Logged in as:
.
Logging out…
Inbox My Account Log Out


Lyson's Life- Ep.01

Author

LysonsLies

Contact | Add Artist to Favorites

Date Submitted

05/16/2008 | 01:01AM EST

File Information

Movie | 1.6 MB

Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score

2.68 / 5.00

Score Rank: #74,527
Popularity Rank: #119,738

247 votes | 664 views

Click an icon to vote on this!

You are not logged in.

If you log in to vote, you could win $100!

Related Submissions

Submissions by LysonsLies:

Everyone Suitable For All Audiences
Lyson's Life- Ep.01
Watch this Movie!
Pop-Up | Add to Favorites

Author Comments

Hey! I'm starting a new series called Lyson's Life. I'm a bored kid and I'd like some honest feedback. Please note that I'm not that great at flash and any types would be great. Let's get this series off the ground!

6 reviews | Log in to write a review | Share this!

The people have spoken

Average Score: 6.0 / 10

Score: 2
vgthing

"Put more into it"

date: June 1, 2008

i just think you need to work harder and longer on each movie to prepare it for others to see. I like your ideas, but you need to animate them better. Things need to be drawn cleaner, voice acting needs to sound better, etc. you've got a good start, you just need to improve.

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.

Score: 10
Static

""Great.""

by: Static
date: May 16, 2008

I'm giving this a 10 for many reasons. But the two that actually worth a rats ass is the fact its hilarious, and that its original. Great work ev, keep it up!

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.

Score: 8
LeonOfBlain

"man!"

date: May 16, 2008

That fly was hilariously large! was that by accident or design?!

May 16, 2008

Author's Response:

Design haha. Flies are hilarious when they are large.

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.

Score: 5
Atzu

"Practice and improvement, that's what it need."

by: Atzu
date: May 16, 2008

Well, everything needs improvement, your walk cycles, your backgrounds, your characters, the audio... nothing practice and study other animations as well can't solve. Just decide what you're more interested now, for example, perspective, or maybe ways to tell story not always "with the camera on the front" like it was a theater, by the way, don't get too upset about it, I'm almost sure that most animators begin making everything very flat, by now I recommend you try to repeat the scene of any movie or animation you like, it may give you some ideas beyond practice, really. You could even adapt some sitcom episode to your series, who knows?

May 16, 2008

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comments. I'm interested in how to improve and comments like these help out a lot. Thanks for watching.

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.

Score: 6
SuperAscendedZAIN

"longer, stronger."

date: May 16, 2008

So, the style is alright. The length though, leaves more wanted. In other words, lengthen it.
also, the sync of the sound and the characters was off at times.

Rate this review:
Helpful!
Useless.
Flag as abusive.
No users have weighed in on this review.