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Lolipop- part 1

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hey guys. I haven't stared making the part 2 yet so wright in your review who you think should win, the red guy, or the blue.

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JOE!!!

I LOVE U WAKSBUDDY!!!

Wow you had a high voice

Blue Guy Should Win...

I Like The Lolipop Concept. I Believe You Can Make An Interesting Flash Out Of The Situation. You Can Make It Better By Adding More Detail In The Background. The Animation Was Actually Not Bad At All. It's Solid, But Overall I Think You Can Improve On This Flash And Future Episodes If Your Willing To Put In More Work Overall.

hahahaha

i'm not gonna lie, that was nice

cute

so the animation was good. i liked how the camera flew past the characters. The voice over however.. listen i know your proell. but some feeling ibably twevle and havent really develope a voice but honestly you can do better. dont hold back. stand away from your mic and actually yell, put some feeling into it. the dialogue on the other hand, was wel written. wasnt to cheesy and the hey ya'll was very creative.

Red guy should win.

Red and Blue both lose.

That was...disturbing.
The animation is kinda cheesy; the two characters stay in pretty much the same positions the whole time and look like the same models with very slight facial features.

The voices were just horrible. Not only did they sound exactly the same, but I got the impression that the artist was trying to make sure no one heard him while he was making the recordings.

Overall rating - Back to the drawing board.

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3,990
Votes
7
Score
2.71 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 15, 2008
8:41 PM EDT