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Soundsnap (Buy!)


Submitted: 05/14/2008 | 11:24AM EST

File Info: Movie | 1.6 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 2.64 / 5.00

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So, this took a few hours at most and its the first time I've added sound to a flash. I've done a few practice flashes before (all were a second or two in length so nothing major) so I'm trying to get better. This isn't cleaned up or anything because its practice. Trying to get movement fluid.

All sounds came from http://www.soundsnap.com/

I'm going to work on a part two and try to learn more stuff about flash. Tutorials really help. :)

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Average Score: 5.8 / 10

Score: 5
TwentySix26

"Good drawing..."

date: May 14, 2008

You have some talent, and i really liked the unpolished style...

Good things:
. the drawing
. the ambient sounds of the water

Couple things i would change:
. Come up with a story- give me a reason to watch, keep watching and want to watch future movies by you.
. If you dont come up with a story- you had better be showcasing some REALLY badass art.
. Make more realistic sound effects or add music- when the tiger pounces into the water, the splash doesnt really reflect a realistic sound. and what was that sound when the moths comes into view? i thought it was going to be music, but it was really choppy.

-26

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Score: 7
mariomaster123

"Nice"

date: May 14, 2008

Good job man, but ya need to work on it some :P\
Add some color and make it longer, but that's it! Great Animation and sound choice, keep it up!!!

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Score: 5
geacu

"well...."

by: geacu
date: May 14, 2008

the sabertooth wuz kinda cute(cuz i luv animals)but other wise...it sukd and it wuz way too short

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Score: 5
Pampman

"nice"

date: May 14, 2008

for practice not bad. but nothing special, too.
i'm looking forward to part 2

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Score: 7
ChainChompC

"Short, but well done"

date: May 14, 2008

I've always been fond of this form of animation, but it was very short.

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