Score: 5

"lol"

by: Shanus

date: June 22, 2008

Hmmm, better but not any real effort put in.

Like the first one, just a slide show, but your drawing skills seemed to improve a little, well in drawing the main character anyway.

The sound was brash and confusing as before. And was good and bad. Just needs some sort of structure.

Overall a smaller score than before because you didnt improve enough but you know what you have to do

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Score: 1

"Terrible"

by: Shadow-1409

date: June 22, 2008

This was actually worse than the first one if you can belive that, it was extremely short and just as boring and senseless as the previous one, are you going to start making effort yet?

The story line makes no sense and does nothing to keep the viewer watching, the graphics were just as terrible as last time and so was the sound, its difficult not to write out an exact copy of my previous review.

Overall it was terrible, AGAIN. The only thing in it that was well done was the preloader. Sorry man. You broke my heart. :P
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Graphics - 1
Sound - 1
Animation - 0

Score: 1

"And you said I sucked"

by: SuperUey

date: June 21, 2008

I'm sorry but you said I sucked?.... WOW! Think about what you write because man oh man this really is bad animation, no story.. Ya it sucks.

Score: 2

"Worse"

by: Little-Rena

date: June 19, 2008

This was actually worse than the first one, it wasn't as long for one thing and nothing really improved here, the graphics are still pretty bad and there is very little animation, it would be good to improve on both of those. The plot here well there was no plot but I mean the whole what of a story you had didn't really work, seemed more like you rushed the idea rather than thought about it, needs more work with a story.

The fast narration is okay, I think that does make for a good fast paced story, but there isn't really anything else here that is all that good. Everything needs working on, the story, the graphics and the length of the whole thing, think about a solid or funny plot and try that, spend longer on it.

1/5

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Score: 2

"Buh... (2)"

by: Coop83

date: June 17, 2008

We've still got the same problems here as in the first wegra adventure. What you need even more in this episode is a decently written plot - this barely had a coherent story, as it was just a few random plotlines thrown together and tied together with acts of violence.

Drawing needs to be improved by zooming in and using a slightly smaller drawing tool. You can use the eraser to round off the edges, making this whole section look better. See tutorials on drawing in Flash to improve this.

A decent vocal artist can be found in the Flash forums or the Voice Acting Club in the Clubs and Crews section of the NG BBS. This would bring you forward a giant step and if your drawing improves at the same rate, you'll be making decent flash in little time.

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