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Yeah, my first ever animation and i've never had any training in it i thinks it looks good considering. Stylistically based on the work of JV mainly Invader Zim and JTHM hope people likes it cuz i want to make more. I lick you :P
The sped up voices
Are a little irritating, also it seems to move too fast - Awesome first try, I'd love to see more. A little more animation would be good, perhaps pick up your own style at some point in the future ;)
Overall, good first try but get yer bum in gear and make the next one - it was too short ;)
it's not bad.
keep practicing on animations, your work definately shows promise. while i was watching this, the animation (or the lack there of) didn't actually bother me. the story was pretty simple, but that just takes time to get better at.
the only issue i really have here is the characters, sickboy and pervert. nothing against the name, its just that how can you tell one from the other. in the flash it was literally just two random guys on a car ride, of which i assume are supposed to be sickboy and pervert.
they're your characters, i suggest putting more time into developing them.
was the one with the hat pervert?
Neither seemed overlly sick or perverted. Its a decent video but the name leads one to believe that its gonna be a bit darker and dirtier.
not bad the animation was a little old looking but nice idea, with some better graphics this could be pretty good.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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