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05/10/08 – 06/10/08
my 4th try at fbf, i made this as a sequil to the master sword breaks, even though that one sucked, i improved my drawing skills in this one, and i hope you enjoy it.
Man, this movie graphics are VEEERRRRYY BAD, improve them before sending an animation, and make a back ground history, not Ganodorf entering Hyrule Castle and beating link ass.
Is this the new movie you were talking about?Hmmm....It's great but you need to add more settings and fighting in it.Keep up your good work.
It was kinda funny but it soulda been longer
Now see, this one didn't completely suck like the other one, I do see lots of improvement. There was even a tiny bit of animation here =) There wasn't really much of a story though..
One major improvement is the speed. In 'Link's Misfortune' it moved extremely slowly, and nothing really happened until the end. In this one it kept moving at a steady pace; much better.
Although the drawing is a little better than what else I've seen, you still need to work on it. Also, the song didn't really fit the scene. Maybe find some other piece? There were a few other tracks that were redone in the same fashion as the forest tune, I'm sure there is something else you could use. Varying your sound effects can help too, there /is/ more than one sound for falling down out there.
And for the love of god, don't reply to me with another assholish comeback. I'm trying to be helpful. Generally I'm a merciless flamer, but since I don't have anything up yet to prove I'm not just another stick animator, and I'm still very new here I'm doing my best to be nice. If you don't have anything civilized to say then just don't reply.
It is evident in your future work that you are improving, the same can even be said about the humor, slightly. The only thing that keeps getting me about these submissions is the style of humor. It is my own personal opinion, but the humor seems slightly childish. What are actually good ideas for humor and plot are slightly overshadowed by stuff like Link pointing towards the sky whenever he drops to the ground. Replace some of these gags with really cool jokes, and improve the animation so it doesn't seem as stiff, and you will start to shine.