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The story of a struggling science fiction writer.
Starring Emil Rodeo, Ruby Tuesday, Thom the Cat and Guy Hardone
The end is a bit abrupt and the plot doesn't read as clearly as it could.
That's about the only really major flaw, but honestly, this is an extremely well done and enjoyable animation.
The other flaw that stood out like a sore thumb for me were the facial expressions. There were none. The faces were way to emotionless. Work on your expressions. Even a cartoon like family guy were facial expressions are minimally represented has more range than these characters. Even Odd-Job jack, which because its a huge tweenfest is terrible with facial expressions, has more range and better expressions than this. You could have stuck a paper bag over each characters head forall their expressions mattered.
Anyways, great animation!
I agree with Opiniotron
The movie was a little long and the ending seemed a bit too casual for the type of build-up the story seemed to provide.
Music was good.
I did find it amusing he got so cleaned up for standing outside in a chicken suit though.
it felt unfinished, the messages were very abstract and subliminal, alot of pieces of the movie felt unnecessary, was far too long to get to the point, and yeah, a sad ending, which was crap because the main character didn't learn anything until the VERY end. It did use the music well though, and messages were brought around without having words spoken, so kudos
but still, it needed alot more polish on those shoes
wohoo the beatles!
Yea i loved it. I know its noir and all but i wish it had a happy ending thou... lol any good job
Really liked the story but the ending needed a bit of a polish. He spent all that time writing that story. It would of been cool to see it get it published and make it big. Anyways, Good story. Now I need to go watch something upbeat before i slit my wrists. lol
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