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May 10, 2008 | 7:22 AM EDT

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starring Emil Rodeo, Ruby Tuesday, Thom the Cat and Guy Hardone

Duration:9 mins

http://emilrodeo.wordpres s.com/

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IEatBabiesIEatBabies

Rated 4 / 5 stars October 1, 2008

Small Critique

The end is a bit abrupt and the plot doesn't read as clearly as it could.
That's about the only really major flaw, but honestly, this is an extremely well done and enjoyable animation.

The other flaw that stood out like a sore thumb for me were the facial expressions. There were none. The faces were way to emotionless. Work on your expressions. Even a cartoon like family guy were facial expressions are minimally represented has more range than these characters. Even Odd-Job jack, which because its a huge tweenfest is terrible with facial expressions, has more range and better expressions than this. You could have stuck a paper bag over each characters head forall their expressions mattered.

Anyways, great animation!


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VillarrealVillarreal

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 1, 2008

I agree with Opiniotron

The movie was a little long and the ending seemed a bit too casual for the type of build-up the story seemed to provide.
Music was good.

I did find it amusing he got so cleaned up for standing outside in a chicken suit though.



OpiniotronOpiniotron

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 1, 2008

shoe shine

it felt unfinished, the messages were very abstract and subliminal, alot of pieces of the movie felt unnecessary, was far too long to get to the point, and yeah, a sad ending, which was crap because the main character didn't learn anything until the VERY end. It did use the music well though, and messages were brought around without having words spoken, so kudos

but still, it needed alot more polish on those shoes
7/10


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OgiyoseOgiyose

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 1, 2008

wohoo the beatles!

Yea i loved it. I know its noir and all but i wish it had a happy ending thou... lol any good job


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toolband79toolband79

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 1, 2008

Good Job!

Really liked the story but the ending needed a bit of a polish. He spent all that time writing that story. It would of been cool to see it get it published and make it big. Anyways, Good story. Now I need to go watch something upbeat before i slit my wrists. lol