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2 - The Story of Khale

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May 9, 2008 | 3:47 PM EDT
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Episode 2/42:

THX review crew!
edit: For everyone who has asked, this is part 2 of 42 episodes, so yes, there will be more =D. This episode was made mostly to give a good feel of the main characters and the world he lives in, plus it sets up for episode 3.

After more than 6 months of work it's finally done! I hope all have as much fun watching this as I had making it!

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Entertaining but not very informing...

I've been waiting for this 'series' to unravel for a while now and I'm still not very sure what in the world it is about. I know the Khale character is supposed to become some almost evil force but this second installment doesn't really explain anything and you're not even sure what is going on or what the point in this episode is. I found this aspect slightly annoying but it only affected my scoring for this when it ended on the completely inappropriate line 'School Is Bullshit', I mean c'mon, why? I may be missing some underlining message about him calling school 'bullshit' as some foreshadowing of what is to come but over than that, it just seems like a session of Random events that result in a flying tree?
However, the animation is of extremely high quality and the music is certainly refreshing and very appropriate for the spring season ;)

LeafWorthy responds:

Thanks for the 'review'. The line is "this is exactly 2 years before I realize that school is bullshit, that it's not about me, it's about them and what they can get from me". I'm not sure if you went to highschool, but I sure did, and it was a LOT different than middle school for me. Honestly, if you DIDNT have a messed up time in highschool at some point, if you didn't at least question what the authorities were cramming down your throat, then the problem here is not my animation. Thank you for the compliments, but if the statement "school is bullshit" doesn't do it for you, you might not want to watch the rest of the series.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

We still don't know the story in "Story of Khale."

This movie has incredible animation and graphics... Anyone who says otherwise is crazy! The sound quality was mostly close to perfect, and the music itself fit very well with the mood of the movie.

I just didn't find it to be that... engaging. Like the first, barely anything happens.

From watching this movie, this is what I've learned about the series:
The main character has a family. He goes to school. Some guy has telepathic powers. That's it.

I just hope that all these 'character introductions' without any storyline doesn't go on for too many episodes. I want to actually know what happens! =)


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


I liked the graphics and songs, but the story wasnt too cool and it was kinda short.
Keep up the good work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS: Why is this movie amature movie, this should be suitable for all audiences, even small kids.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The audio could have been better

You could try to put in a little better audio for the voices.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

One major flaw

Superb animation, originality at its finest, awesome music, but sadly your sound quality and voice actors brought the overall flash quality down. This looks like something that could be a superb, but the sound quality is simply horrible. At times the syncing and timing of the voices is COMPLETELY off. The mouths don't move very well to the lines and even if they do, your quality is so poor it just does not match with the beautiful art. The other flaw is the voice actors are simply not convincing. There are many great voice actors on newgrounds that could pull off many different transitional voices, but the ones you have chosen are sadly said... well... dissapointing. Overall I think this flash could be something amazing, sadly sound is just such a KEY component for animations that you need it in order to make a successful flash. 7/10 3/5, looking forward to your future works