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by DaDocta
05/08/2008 | 01:16AM EST
Movie | 1.3 MB
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2.18 / 5.00
Score Rank: #105,869 Popularity Rank: #110,187
353 votes | 804 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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This is my first flash animation. Me trying to get a star for my girl, I fail and try all night until...
thanks for the commetns.
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Average Score: 5.8 / 10
"Good First Try"
Couple things.. Try to use a faster frame rate.. I'm guessing you are using 12 fps, The Drawings were good, and I know its alot of work to make a good looking drawing.. especially in flash and double especially if your using a mouse. If you havent already, get a wacom tablet.. will help lots. Also dont be afraid to draw a second picture to make the animation look better, trying to recycle the same symbol just comes off as very stiff and static.. Also, take your time.. Quality counts.. quantity.. well not so much But again.. this is a pretty good try for your first toon.. I hope to see more and here's to you getting much better in the future. I hope this helped. BTW Music was awesome ;)
"Not good"
this is not good there is no sound and it is short
"awseome!!!"
its awsome even its have no sound but thers a litle sound. im playing the last wizard part 1 and im playing this movie and it the song of the game of the last wizrd is a good song for this movie.
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good style :D but really needs sound... -7 for sound because sound really makes it that much better.
+10 style -7 sound
not bad, but not having audio seriously hurts this movie... also, the animation looks like it is in slow motion; your stylle is good, however