Score: 10
"Fucking awesome."
date: December 6, 2008
This is by far one of your best submissions that I have ever seen.
Animation/Graphics - The animation and the graphics were alright for the most part. Chaz-o's drawings and animation was very smooth and well done as Yoshi's parts weren't the best done, but still kind of neat in their own style. Probably the smoothness animation from any of your flashes though.
Story/Content - Ha, a pretty good idea for a collab like this. I enjoyed it. I think that you could have had a couple more scenes, but for the most part the length of the submission was pretty good. I also loved the one by Chaz-o, which resulted in heavy metal music and the don't trust random pies thing. I liked the joke that Yoshi made about Pi. That was a good one.
Audio - Pretty good sound effects and music. Nothing really to complain about here really. Perhaps you could have used some voices, but that's really the only thing to fix with the audio part.
Overall - A great collab. Why don't you make more of these?
December 7, 2008
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much for this review omgomgomg!!! I am going to individually respond to all your reviews now.
For starters, yeah the character was shaky and the gameplay laggy. But you gotta cut me some slack on the scripting of the .clipEvents. The music WAS indeed superior and Andrew W.K. is without doubt awesome. But I digress as this was a mere BETA test. In the future I hope to release even more unique stuff like this. Perhaps this time with a lovable character such as a talking pumpkin.
I really hope this game gets sponsored. I could really use some money for gas. Otherwise I'll have to get a job and there goes my right-side creativity. Baw well.
Thanks again though. I will continue to improve with my journey in the wonderful world of Flash.
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