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May 6, 2008 | 8:09 PM EDT

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Edit: Been Getting lots of negetive feedback on me mubling in the old version of this so I re-recorded my voice and here you go!

Worked hard on this Flash and it's my first ever. I'm still learning and I hope you enjoy. I saw the My NewGrounds collection and thought it was kewl so I wanted to come up with one so here is mine :D

Edit: This was more of a project to get to know Flash 8 so I can progress and get better. I had to start this over like 5 times because errors poped up durring the making so I got frustrated and sped through some parts and thats why it looks well kinda bad.

Reviews


Pet-KillerPet-Killer

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 14, 2008

.......

you do use a lot of gradients :(



fmafan1fmafan1

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 6, 2008

nice try...

....but definite room for improvement. first of all the audio quality was pretty bad, and i had trouble understanding what u were saying, and the other thing was instead of using real props, like ur phone, or cash, just draw it straight up in flash instead if u want to keep in tradition of the My Newgrounds trend. over all, i say just keep working hard, and you'll get it eventually ^.^


DeadFlower responds:

thx for the tips... I had problems im Flash 8... like in the middle of making it it would pop up an error message and close out on me and I would have to start it over like 5 times... so I got really fustrated and speed through it. I know it could of been better. This was more of a flash to get to know Flash 8 so I can get better but kudos for the review :D

-DJDF


KingAdamTheGreatKingAdamTheGreat

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 6, 2008

Cool

it was hard to hear what you were saying


DeadFlower responds:

Not anymore :D


Zack3918Zack3918

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars May 6, 2008

Good

nice flash, but i couldn't hear what you said



Iamgod00021Iamgod00021

Rated 0 / 5 stars May 6, 2008

Ew.

The problem is, you mumbled too much, and you overused gradients. Better luck next time dude.