Score: 3

"Dude..."

by: Faraz-Ahmed

date: May 28, 2008

Mate, what the hell. I thoguht the animation started already, and then it says "PLAY".
I was like wtf o_O
*btw- at the end it has him finsihed shooting the MP5's, why are there bullets on the floor? Shouldn't they be bullet cases?*
Also, it's wayyy to slow. One of the most boring animations i've ever seen.
Add some colour, do something more original and fix the backgrounds, they sucked balls. Especially where you have big lines merging with thin lines. The perspectives sucked and the drawing was very poor. The gun's didnt fit in with the movie.
Don't do another, do something different, but you have started already so it's good. But take advice from more expirienced people.

Score: 7

"hey Pman its me Bob ^^"

by: Hi5er

date: May 10, 2008

To be honest with you I think you are doing very well!

I have just finished watching all your latest animations and I must say you are definatley improving quickly, my favourite was "The Patriot".

Heres my words of advice:

- Keep watching the tutorials I showed you
- Your art work is fantastic! Now we just need to get the animation sorted :D
- Try animating smaller things first and then slowly make your ideas bigger, that way it makes animating easier...
- Practice working at "24 FPS" or above, as it is much easier to animate with.

Hope this helps and good luck in the future ^^

Score: 10

"not bad for your second!"

by: sam-delitans

date: May 7, 2008

10 for hard work put in! 10 for animation itself as it was your 2nd try! considering it was good. but 8 and 9 because the music, blood and graphic were kinds bad. but anyway! overall still 10!!
i really want to know what your third is gonna be? u might wanna imporve by putting faster pace so that it can earn the viewer's attention. slow-motion are recommended but not that slow.. still, your a noob and so am i :). we both got areas of improvement also. simple story, maybe rather long and boring though(no offence).
still looking forward for your next aniamtion :D

Score: 6

"Not bad"

by: IHaveNo-Username

date: May 6, 2008

You might want to lower the file size next time. The music did not fit at all too in my opinion.

I see the effort you put in there, but there were plenty of mistakes that lowered the score I have you.

Score: 4

"Speed"

by: baronheron

date: May 6, 2008

the idea is good the art is fine but, but PLEASE speed it up, the 2nd slow motion sceen i just shut the window.

This will improve your movie a great deal.