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There were many flaws in this such as the beginning of the flash where the girls dancing didn't actually move. They were just frozen there for like, ten seconds then they started to dance to the music.

Then you had a boring background. In the original Caramell Dansen, the background is so pretty and fun to look at. This was just a simple play with the tinting tool which was rather disappointing.

Then you had the length of the movie. Exceedingly short and the music just switched off nowhere near the end of the song. (Although, the song didn't even start at the beginning, either) What's even worse is, after the movie has finished, the girls are still dancing. No replay button or anything. Heck, the girls you used weren't even your own artwork. Just .gif files.

So, you can see why I was disappointed with this. You could easily improve by trying to draw your own characters (and this could lead to you making a series with the characters which means the version of Caramell Dansen featuring your characters would be a clever way to plug-in and advertise your new series). Can't draw? Practice! It always helps! Still having doubts? Try and order a graphics tablet - most animators have them.

Also: Try to use the full version of the song. It's not hard to find and it'd be worth it. It'd definitely bring the quality of your Caramell Dansen flash up a couple of notches so it's worth a try!

Good luck to you in the future with whatever projects you have lined up but for now, I'm going to have to give this a 2/10.

Score: 8

"what a tease"

by: groundpwndr

date: May 5, 2008

i think if you were to make this a lil longer and maybe throw a couple more moves and different angles/scenes, this would be a hit. those girls were instant hottness and the music was infectious. just way too short for something so damn cute/fun.
also nice balance between resolution and quality. still nice to look at but big enough to fill your eyes with those girls. dont start from scratch but add to this and make it longer with more. btw this is my new homepage start for my intertubes.

Score: 2

"....."

by: me06

date: May 5, 2008

http://marinastalker.deviantart.com ring a bell?

Score: 9

"Yet again I succumb to the dansen!"

by: riganomic

date: May 15, 2008

YEAH!

Score: 10

"Meh"