Score: 3
"Terrible"
date: December 6, 2008
* I bet people will flag this as abusive even though there's nothing wrong and I'm offering criticism*
I'm sorry but that was really bad.
I gave you 3 / 10 for effort and the preloader.
First of all, if you're going to make a long list of who made the flash and etc. at the start, at least make it entertaining to look at, or put it at the end. I had to sit through 15 secs of text moving from left to right on a ugly background.
Secondly, rock music and random / experimental flashes DO NOT MIX. The song quality was also horrible, making it even sound worst.
The animations were too random and boring, and just when the animation looked like it was getting good, it ended and you got to another clip of a animation with a deformed human doing some random things.
Just my opinion, don't take it too seriously.
December 26, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks for the detailed review.
Yeah, the sound quality is pretty bad. I've found out how to fix that now, though, and will in my next flash.
And yes, I agree that in this, the animations were pretty random. I'll take this into consideration for next time and try to make it fit to the music better. I think the main problem is that I started this flash as a several music videos and then cut it down.
And with the end of the animation, it's mostly because there's not really anything else to do in the next part of the song. With a few of the little clips, they were longer, but I cut them down to get the best parts together.
