Score: 6
"Promising"
date: May 4, 2008
I really enjoy your work Eammy. The music choice and backgrounds are superb. However, unlike your other submission, RedEye, this animation really needs to be longer. The premise for it is exciting, but it's over way too quick.
The explosion effect is quite impressive, as are all the sound effects and backgrounds.
The objects in the foreground, such as the vehicles and characters, seem a bit too 'cartoony' compared to the realistic backgrounds. Perhaps you should adjust either the background or foreground so that they match more closely. I would prefer that you made the foregrounds more realistic but if you did it the other way around it would still be an improvement.
Anyway I hope to see more movies from you whether you continue this idea or do something different.
