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May 2, 2008 | 2:37 AM EDT

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**FRONT PAGE UPDATE**
First off. Thanks to the front page gods. Secondly, this was an installment in a fine arts gallery which people didn't necessarily stare at the whole time, but rather see something on it, walk away to another piece, and then come back and see what has changed. Sorry to everyone who thinks it's slow. :)

Delivered May 2nd as promised. Now, I need sleep and then it's time to work on Griswold 2.

For my senior project I wanted to do something that showed all the different fields of the fine arts department and also display the different emotions that an art student may go through in his years of study.

Hope you enjoy. If ya leave a message then there is a good chance I will respond to it.
Thanks!

WARNING: This is a continuous loop once you get back to his original project.

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S0122017S0122017

Rated 4 / 5 stars

ARTFULL

I liked the art.


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M-ShackM-Shack

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

good and bad parts

Drawing, music was all good, but animaiotn was a lil slow. The guy and Ninja walked really awkward which was kind of distracting to me. The story was a good base but i think u coulda done better to keep us entertained, after awhile I got kind of bored.


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simonsayzsimonsayz

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i dig

i dig dude i dig it all makes perfect sense haha



Lesbian-WafflesLesbian-Waffles

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Needs a lot of improvement

The art is decent, I like the coloring and the character design. Your three MAJOR issues is pacing, animation, and story.

First off, it's very boring to watch. The character repeatedly over gestures in place at every given opportunity, dragging each part out far more than it needs to. Drop all the unnecessary pauses with shrugs and eye shifting. Speed thigns up and have them make sense. people do not act like that. They multitask...which segways to the next issue.

Get some secondary motion in there. You also animate a lot of single actions: walking, shrugging, looking, etc... but you never combine them. Have him walk around while lookin back and forth and maybe sigh in dismay. Have the character act realistically.

Story...what i gather is the character is trying to show artwork and not getting the results he wants from a a crowd off screen. I assume... Have the story be more clear. Even if it's nonsensical, still give a direction. Find some way to narrate the occurrences taking place.


LiLg responds:

See. Here's the thing. That happened in the actual gallery with people walking around and junk. I made it boring on purpose so that people wouldn't crowd around it and just straight up watch it.


Fake-ZarkelFake-Zarkel

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Good but Slow...

Even that guy start to sleep ! XD

Next time speed it up...