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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
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04/30/08 – 05/17/08
portal view 437598 <--- the newer fran look, please, tell me what i should do with him.
The very first episode in my series (hopefully) i hope my skills progress along the way of the series.
-Fran is the main blue guy, ive yet to name the red guy, also, the music is "i crush my battle oppent's balls" which i found very suiting. If you do comment, please, constructive criticism, its my second flash.
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It was all done on one layer, no tweens, also, its my second flash, after various tutorials, and lots of questions, its my finished product, i'm hoping before i get to highschool i learn how to use it better so that when im in the tech lab I don't fail like in most of my other classes.
The animation is too crude and rough, and I don't even get the storyline.
4/10 for the effort.
Suggestions:
1. Watch the flash tutorials, the advanced ones.
I applaud you for trying not to use tweening, but there's a reason everyone uses it. Also, you need backgrounds and scenery.
And don't just use one layer, you'll run into problems.
But if you're going to use no tweening, use a higher framerate.
That was fucking badass.
Since I see you have yet to start high school, Ill say this was pretty good. Of course, animation could be more fluid and backgrounds would help too, but I digress. You get 6 stars. Thanks.
First of all, the graghics are a bit rough, details about the dueling sticks are approved. Secondly, all I saw was that the stick with the sword (Quite frankly, you even did not draw his upper body.) cut the other stick's arm off and the movie also loops. Remember, a great movie always contains details and never loops. I hope that you put more effort on your next submission.
how long that take u?? thats the kind of stuff i do during class to make fun of my friends cuz the cant animate worth a damn..... serious man.... no offence but u gotta work on ur skills.... go to the FlashTutorial here on NG and learn dude.... they didnt make that for nothing.
Good Luck! Keep With it and Work Hard! Dnt let anybody tell u that u cant do it!
lol. laters
no dethklok.. most importantly... no pickles... :(