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Apr 30, 2008 | 4:44 AM EDT

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Rated 5 / 5 stars


You cannot be awed since you are awesome incarnate.


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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty Good

I thought this was a pretty good entry, although at times it seemed to be a bit of a what moment and text on walls might have looked better in a messy font with some effects over it, just too look more the part. The lack of voices was okay, you seemed to do it well without them, so that was good.

Much of the animation was okay and it wasn't just random fighting through the whole thing, good. Also, quite a bit of humour to this, some of it was funny, others maybe just a smile, but still good work in that area too. The scene where they are drinking tea was probably one of the better parts I thought, lol.



johnathan-wrathborne responds:

yeah I would have liked to have had more time to develop the graffiti and stuff, was difficult enough to not nit pick everything and make sure it was a sperfect as perfect could be, not easy being a perfectionist under a deadline.

I do wish I could have crammed in some more of my ideas for the action sequence, but I'm happy with what I have.