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This submission was BLAMMED by our users.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
04/28/08 – 05/04/08
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this is only a demo to see if the NG populace like the style..
the controls : D is to use telekinesis and W is to go back to your gun Space is reload and thats it :>
In the full version I plan on having a unique storyline/characters and 4 abilities of choice : fire, ice, telekinesis and electricity.. ^-^ and such things as telekinetic shields and ice shards also a in-game play-list :>
Please leave reviews of how I can become better and where I can improve .
PS THIS WAS MADE AT 30 FPS SO ITS NOT CHOPPY JUST A BIG FILE ^-^
i do like the style and i think allot mroe will too! But when i came to some kind of boss didnt mather how much i shot him i or he wouldnt die.
Some points of improvement.
The gun is really all you see all the time, so make it look better ppl will vote higher just for that.
maybe the enemies could move instead of just pop up?
Anyway nice id
Good luck im looking forward to the whole thing!
Although the demo is still very primitive, your ideas for the finished game sounds quiet good. I don't know if you wanted to turn off the sounds of the enemys, but this should be implemented definitely.
I hope you will keep on doing this work and improve the gameplay. Unfortunately the telekineses blow didn't work.
nice work man. good work. hope you finish it soon!
Really it's kinda good.
Thing is, when you shoot ANYWHERE, they fall as if hit in the head. You can improve de graphics a bit, I mean, that round gun, and the stance of the enemies is kinda crappy.
But it's a nice project. One thing I really liked, was how smoothly it ran.
I'm giving it a 4, because it's good, but not great.
this was very good but how do u kill the zombie guy or since its beta u cant get past there?
if you making your art better and more guns or xtras it could be realy fun
a 6 because its a demo
there is a difference between 'there, their, and they're.' It may not be clear in pronunciation, just like the difference between since & sense. The line 'there no match for him' makes it sound like he's going clothes shopping, or speed dating. The action is nice, because with a touchpad, I can only control the cursor and click so fast. I can't kill the guy shooting blue balls at me, and he doesn't do me any damage. I emptied all my clips on him and finally just closed the game. Also, I suggest refining your drawing style a little to make the lines neater, and the look will be vastly improved. The music is nice, and the general look is pretty good, just a little simple in general appearance.
Nice game, but grapics could be better specially the gun, is vey important. But was ok for the demo. Also I couldnt beat the xombie or whatever it was.
It's a good, but the gun and the grapics can be better
it was fun,but i think the graphics could be better,but, never the less.it was a good game
IMHO you should improve the graphics... I mean you must improve it :P The gun looks like hairdryer or something, and HUD should be over the hand not under.
However I think your final product will be preety good. Practice makes master ;)
P.S. How can I kill that boss thing? He can't even hurt me, you should fix that.
final game should be good > D
Well, graphics are not bad for a FPS, and add more fight before boss so the game is more addicting. Improve your game and you'll deserve a 10.