not actually...
pretty stupid... what's the point in some dildos attaching each others hearts?
Author Comments
This is my first Flash submission, and I know it's not the best quality, at all, but it got me a good grade in 6th form! :D
Sorry about the sound quality, I have no idea what happened with it.
Anyway, Vanilla Sky have a video for this on t'internet, just google it. As you may have guessed it parodies the original Umbrella by Rihanna, this is a more "rocky" version of the song, it's pretty good.
Thanks for viewing, please leave constructive critisicm, I'm still learning Flash and would appreciate any advice!
You've got potential.
You really do. The "camera" work was great, but your drawings were lacking. You've got one thing a lot of new poeple here don't have: a sense of cinimatic control. This is much better than most "first flash submissions" I've seen. Keep up the good work.
Cicieregoddammit!
I know you're trying to oust Neil Cicierega at his work, but I'd prefer a song in a foreign language to go with your track.
Okay.
The music is great, you had some nice effects, but the drawings were bad, and those yellow/blue things looked like dildos. Seriously. 3/5
Nice, good for a front page...
Improving graphics will make it a big hit!
4/5 8/10