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This new episode, contains music, unlike episode 1, but too bad that I'm not good in creating music according to the visual movements, so it sucks a little, and i didn't work to much in the story line either.
The animation could use a little work, but all in all it wasn't too bad. I like the coloring style, although the art overall could use some improvement. Still, it's one of the better things I've seen today. Good job =)
Very nice little story, and I like the interaction with the artist (of course, it has been done before; my point is it's a good element of it). The art quality was a little low, but keep working at it.
Consider, however, using voices instead of text.
i must say, good work. I can see you've put a lot of time and effort in it.
pretty nice how you fiddled with the music and the amusing story line.
i see potential
Interesting concept. It was interesting to watch really.
You did kinda of draw things a bit nice even though a lot of the art was simple to look at. I liked the brush painting of the background that was kinda of a nice touch to this.
The music for this was a little rough on the ears a bit cause of the constant jabbing of the piano key that was going on though. It help set the pace of the flash though despite its roughness. Might want to chose something else for setting the pace of your flashes, cause its a little hard on the ears while listening to the jabbing noises of the piano key.
I had bit of trouble following the story a bit. It was going a bit fast for me to keep up at times really, but I did figure out much that was going enough to enjoy it a little. Should see about a bit more a slower type pace so its a little easier to follow here and there.
Nice concept. You got something that might be kinda of cool in a way. Although it does still need a lot of work though.
I dont know!
I dont know how you came up with it. but it sure was something diffrent :)
Like the music.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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