Decent

The animation could use a little work, but all in all it wasn't too bad. I like the coloring style, although the art overall could use some improvement. Still, it's one of the better things I've seen today. Good job =)

Pretty good

Very nice little story, and I like the interaction with the artist (of course, it has been done before; my point is it's a good element of it). The art quality was a little low, but keep working at it.

Consider, however, using voices instead of text.

yeahs

i must say, good work. I can see you've put a lot of time and effort in it.
pretty nice how you fiddled with the music and the amusing story line.

i see potential

I dont know!

I dont know how you came up with it. but it sure was something diffrent :)
Like the music.