Score: 8

"Nice"

by: Shanus

date: October 21, 2008

A really well put together movie and menu

I really liked how it looked, very nice animation style and your menu was very intuitive. There were a few oddities about it, but I mainly figured it out.

Really liked the song choice, suited the movie very well. Great job

Overall it did seem a bit unfinished, but you did bring some interesting things to the table, and the menu was like nothing I'd ever really seen. Great work

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Score: 8

"The interface was too complicated"

by: Sonofkirk

date: October 21, 2008

You did a great job with the animation and the graphics. It looked very professional. Smooth animation, the movements of the characters weren't lagy and a good job with the graphics too, though as I said above, the interface was too complicated. I mean there was a lot of button and and simplier interface would be better in my opinion. But I assume it must a hard job to put so many option. Also the colors could be improved, I mean the blue and the black are too close and I it's difficult to see the elements well.

I liked like the characters are introduced with all their informations and stuff, it's a really good idea. Although I found the interface too busy, the menu at the top of the window is also a good addition (the flash infos, synopsis, characters). And one last thing, nice preloader. The loading was long and the high quality preloader is a good thing. And very last thing, the customized mouse was a good addition.

A good choice of a audio tracks, the sound quality was perfect and the songs were well chosen ... don't have anything to complain about here : ).

Overall it was very good, you could improve the interface and the colors a bit but apart from these two things, it's a really nice work. I'm looking forward seeing the whole flash : ).

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Score: 9

"decent"

by: perfect-insanity

date: October 19, 2008

Visuals: well drawn and animated, made me really want to see the finished product when you release it, I really enjoyed having the background information to read, and I couldn't pick out anything else that is in need of editing, the characters look great too

Audio: wouldn't have been my personal choice of audio for this trailer, even as a back-up, the one that's on now is non-aggressive and sort of takes away from the trailer

Overall: good job, visuals are great, audio works with the visuals but can be better, I'm not exactly sure what was going on in the animation so the background info helped a lot, thanks, and I can't wait for the full video

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Score: 8

"Hello"

by: Deflektor

date: October 18, 2008

Let's see, then.

It's a nice trailer you got there.

There is a background story, and the scenario looks interesting. It makes the viewer more impatient to know the story. Besides, you even have descriptions of the characters, not only a synopsis. Which makes things even more interesting.

Graphically, i think it still needs some work. It's stylish, i give you that, and the animations are pretty good, but the anatomy isn't well respected. Especially the heads that are too long. Other than that, there's nothing that wrong.

As for the music, i was expecting something more agressive. The song you chose is good, but doesn't fit the action in my opinion. Also, it lacks sounds, although it isn't easy to find good sounds and put them in a flash. Besides, it's only a trailer, so it's forgivable.

I guess i said everything. Other than the few things i said, it has potential. Keep on progressing !

(§ Jorma Poyer AKA Deflektor §)
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Score: 8

"Nice trailer."

by: Fro

date: October 15, 2008

Isn't this a trailer of something that you made a trailer of before? I just kind of remember reviewing something like this a little while ago.

Animation/Graphics - Good drawing and good animation here. There really isn't much to say and I don't really think I can say anything against it. The animation was smooth and everything was drawn perfectly fine. You had a very interesting set up to show the flash with the border inside the flash with all of the menu selections right there. It's kind of different because usually you would see these at the beginning on a menu, but you put them right in with the animation itself. Good job.

Story - I like how you included all the different buttons like the story, notes, etc.. They told us the background of everything, which was nice to know. Especially the background of each of the characters. I know it's a trailer, but the animation you show us does leave a little room where we might not exactly know what's going on, even though you do add the background stories in. The stop and play button was nice, but like mentioned before instead of just a stop button a pause button would be nice. I won't go into that anymore though because I didn't really think the stop button was too necessary here.

Audio - A nice selection of audio and all other audio related things. (Lol at how that is all I can say in this section compared to how long my other sections were. Oh well it looks like this little extra side note made that better) No problems here really.

Overall - A good trailer, (I'm happy I have firefox, I spelled that word wrong almost every time) I can't wait to see the final production of this if you do happen to get it done. Good work.

C52

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