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This is the first part of a flash I am working on. There are two more but rreally it all goes together as one flash, I just want some feedback about how It is going so far.
Yeah I know his face is kind of wiggly but it is better than stick figures right?
EDIT, holy crap it is GREEN!
This is awesome!
"Gimmee back the microphone!"
i liked it ..the creativity was good too. the fat crayon style was genius as well. great job!
i like it!
the rough, "fat crayon" look works for a lot of animation/story tasks and will work with what you are doing too.
With this age of photorealistic rendering, the STORY to me becomes even more important-
with that said tho, the lipsync needs a bit of work, especially since you do close ups on the face. good start man, keep it up!
More story to come...come...come...come...
in its own sence
Well, it was an interesting start but I think that you should work on your animation skills a LITTLE more and try again. Nice try though. =)
I think my animation is better than my drawing capabilities, I really can't draw.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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a clock day story
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