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04/23/2008 | 08:01PM EST
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Average Score: 5.2 / 10
"I'll tell it true."
It was okay, hopefully this will help you.
GOOD: *Cool Story *Cool Characters *Good effects
BAD: *You use movie clips to much. Vary it more. *Use more sprite backgrounds. *Improve your grammar. *Work on fights a little longer.
If you do that, you should be good.
"sweet"
why do u make so many errors
"Pretty good"
This is a pretty good storyline. I feel the animation wasn't as good as you could be. A little more effort could fix the minor things like sound on more of the places that don't have sound and the green lines I see on the edge of the animation sometimes.
"Ummm"
Did you edit your script before you made this flash.
Your grammar is terrible. I'm sorry. I bet the idea is cool, but I can't even get it to make sense right now.
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that was really stupid and pointless. cut the little green squiggles at the side n learn to talk english and it will be better. to be continue? how stupid are you? decent idea for a story tho... i guess...