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Eulogy For: Bonzias CarGame tut

(Score at Death: 1.72/5.00)

This submission was BLAMMED by our users.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

04/23/08 – 07/08/08


Submitted by Myles Rosson (bonzia1322) with the following comments:

I made this in like 10 minutes so its not that good . Hope it helps. Eny errors please tell me

Error: when it says hold and move to get out of the car hold A and move.

Score: 0
LazyPint

"Broken"

date: April 23, 2008

Half the text is cut off at the top and the AS is way too small to read.

It's also dull without sound and your artwork is bland.


Score: 0
clamsd101

"Work for Improvment"

date: April 23, 2008

Follow what the guy before me said, and also not to offend you but... that didn"t help me much at all. Maybe add a Menu of Contents. That would help greatly to it. Instead of the spirtes just use a simple white backround. And DO NOT make the AS copy and paste. That is terrible for the user. Make it so that they can read it and write it into flash them selves. While doing this make sure that the code is broken down so that you can explain it.