Score: 5

"lol?"

by: Taigon

date: June 20, 2008

that was alright funny message at the end, try to make your animations a little les squary but hey, gotta give ya effort points on it seamin i havent finished mine and well yea you now..................well thats all i can think of right now ><

Score: 8

"Decent Attempt"

by: domdom2323

date: April 23, 2008

You have made a decent effort for your flash. I recommend that you try and tighten up some of the programming to make it flow better as I thought that it was a little stilted in some parts. Improve it and I'll raise my rating.

Keep up the good work

Domdom2323

Score: 9

"Lost a star because"

by: SvDMIssion2

date: April 23, 2008

he can't dance. Amazing though for a first shot. Keep on Keepin on man.

Score: 4

"I kinda sucked..."

by: Ilikekola

date: April 23, 2008

But sins it was your first try ill give you props next time try to make a plot line or make it funny or some thing :)

Score: 4

"This flash has amazing potential."

by: RyanTime2

date: April 23, 2008

I suggest a few things:
1.Shading
2.Better art
3.Submit audio to audio portal then use it and refer yourself, helpful.
4.Have more than just people dancing, add some jokes
5.(related with four) or if you don't like humor, (which is much easier since you won't need to do a story of realistic intelligence) you may use drama, serious shorts, or maybe evena horror spoof, anything can happen in NG.

I wish you the best of luck, you seem liek an honest new user from newgrounds. Bless ya! -RyanTime2