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This is my first good animation, which i actually spent the most time on.
it took me a few days to make.
dont blam plz
Oh wow, haha.
Alright so lets see. This is pretty good for a first (or a first good as you said) animation but there are of course a few bad points.
First I won't rate on the graphics since as you said they were premade sprites.
As for the animation it was smooth for the most part, though very slow, and a few things were less than perfect (like the flipping of guns that were, apparently, paper thin) and a few things just didn't make sense. (Such as someone dying by being shot in what would roughly be their thigh or leg.
And finally the music and sound effects were pretty good quality wise.
All in all it's good for a beginning but you have a lot of room to improve. It did make me laugh though when he jumped through the air for no reason to smack into walls. Good work and I hope my comments can help you improve in some way.
very nice but a little slow other then that i enjoyed it
Great for a first
Its a good start.
next time, show texts longer, I had problem reading fast enough to read them.
I'm just being honest, Pie doesn't exactly go with guns and violence but i'm open to new ideas
seen this b4?
I'm not sure about this, and please correct me if im wrong. But isnt this just an old madness movie that u've added a little x-tra stuff on (in other words, rip-off, stolen, copied and so on)
i havent ripped off another one, i just thought of the idea, and submitted it, it was a while before i noticed there was another submission with the same name
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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