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this is my first ever compleated animation submited to newgrounds, it a little note on recycling the animation has been desighned in a comical fashion to lighten the mood, this isent ment to be preachy so i apoligise if thats the way it turns out
Yay for fun morality!
Is it me or are people obsessed with spelling on here? Give it a rest! Lots of you bloody write abbreviated to extremes so don't give people stick just because they miss typed and over looked it. . ANYWAY moving on!
I like how everything isn't the size it normally is, I think you could have animated the box a little more while it was... uh... sliding, XD perhaps you could have made it hop like it did before. Other then that I can't see a problem with it I think it's great, if, as I've said to you before, it's a little... soppy for your name. XD
The animation was simple, the story was good, I believe.
Hope you can do better with animation in the future. ^^
I think this is good for a first.
If you happen to make more flash movies in the future, I would like to see you use some sound effects in your work(I think I'm pretty sure that everybody here can agree with me here :D ).Sound effects play a big part in making a good flash(unless your aiming for something else).But good work anyway.
Dont worry, my next animations will feature sounds,im also aiming for them not to be for the faint of heart, unfortionetly it will take very long time before one is finished look out for it
Thanks for your tips and coments
Good job for a first submission
The graphics are basic and the sound screeches a bit but it has a good moral and a job well done for a first time submission.
yeh spelled story wrong
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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