Score: 3

"Oh man."

by: zedd56

date: August 28, 2008

Very choppy. Yes, very choppy indeed.
This could have been a lot better; you need to read up on some tutorial on basic flash techniques (ex: did you know about onion skinning?)

It was animated in 20fps but it looked like you triple-framed most of it. (In case you don't know, that's when you make 1 keyframe, 2 frames, basically when only every third frame is a keyframe)

Also you need to learn a bit more about sticks, because most of this looked like it was out of dbz (and so does all your other stuff haha), and dbz doesn't work as well with sticks as old school martial arts Xiao style does. Or speedstyle, if you can pull that off properly without spamming blurs, it looks quite epic.

So, in conclusion, you have lots to learn, but you are on your way.
I suggest you go to shiftlimits.com, make an account, talk on the forums, ask people for some tips/tutorials/etc. and you need to learn basic flash things like how to make the music stop when the movie does.

Anyways, that's pretty much all i've got to say. Happy animating!

-Cheers, Zedd56

Score: 10

"its all right i gess"

by: ArjunS

date: May 4, 2008

im give this a ten because your took a long time on it

Score: 4

"Preloader"

by: CazmoV

date: April 21, 2008

This flash was actually okay after I spend 2 minutes tweaking with the options trying to get it to start.
Sort the preloader out.

Also, a bit of originality please?

Good Try (:

CazmoV

Score: 2

"Boring"

by: Manhart

date: April 21, 2008

This just look like all the other movies, except for it is badder, and that the music screws up after watching this short repetitive movie 3 times.
So I am sorry if you spend so many weeks on this, but it is just not good enough.