lol
thats funny water in mars keep going
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made with liveswif
this is my first movie and I just would like to get feedback it not done yet but im here to make it better.
make sure to comment thats why I post it here!
elbarto66 responds:
lol thank you
i iddnt get it
sorry...
Confusing
it's a lil choppy.
... What?
This is a weird flash movie. I don't understand the plot or the story really well. The graphics are horrible and don't overuse gradients. What this flash movie needs is concrete storyboarding and better graphics.
I am confused????????
Ok I read the story 5 TIMES!!!!! Then it made little sense. The movie made less sense. I understand this is your first project but the story you created and the movie you made seemed completely unrelated and I could not figure out what was going on. The story...after i made sense of it sounds pretty solid just create the movie to follow that.
elbarto66 responds:
hey thanks ya I should try to make it yes to get.
I was going to explane more when it was done.
buts to everyone that comment even if it is only 2!
