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this is my first movie and I just would like to get feedback it not done yet but im here to make it better.
make sure to comment thats why I post it here!
thats funny water in mars keep going
lol thank you
i iddnt get it
it's a lil choppy.
This is a weird flash movie. I don't understand the plot or the story really well. The graphics are horrible and don't overuse gradients. What this flash movie needs is concrete storyboarding and better graphics.
I am confused????????
Ok I read the story 5 TIMES!!!!! Then it made little sense. The movie made less sense. I understand this is your first project but the story you created and the movie you made seemed completely unrelated and I could not figure out what was going on. The story...after i made sense of it sounds pretty solid just create the movie to follow that.
hey thanks ya I should try to make it yes to get.
I was going to explane more when it was done.
buts to everyone that comment even if it is only 2!
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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